Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is often argued that parents of children who study in private schools do not need to make a contribution through taxes to the state schools. I completely disagree with this point of view, and analysing the disadvantages of tax reduction and social benefits of imposing them will show this true.
Perhaps the far most important reasons for not reducing taxes for families who pay for private education is to guarantee the equality between wealthy and poor people. It seems logical that affluent families often send their children to private schools since these places are more likely to provide better education. As a result, a tax relief is no more than an encouragement for those families to continue their actions, which only emphasise the unfairness. It is true that those parents have the right to allow their children to have the best education system, but on the whole of the society, government should try to let everyone have equal opportunites.
Imposing taxes on families whose children are sent to private school can be beneficial for society as a whole, both the rich and the poor. One big advantage is that it can help all members of society to have a high quality public education system with the money from taxes contribution. This will result in a well-qualified workforce, and in turn a productive and prosperous country. For example, most company owners need well-educated and competent staffs, and a well-funded state schools can provide this
In conclusion, I would support to the idea of not applying tax discount on families whose children attend private schools because of the concerns about unequality and impacts on public system.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06545454545 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7567234114 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567272727273 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4560891313 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.3 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374940250707 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134623825636 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551990570389 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215108908585 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238009949238 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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