The first car appeared on the British roads in 1888. By the year 2000, there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.
Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In 1988 the first car appeared on British roads, which became the most popular way of traveling on roads. Recent studies have shown that by the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. This raised a question to the agenda whether alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and there should be an introduction of international law on control of car ownership and use. I strongly agree with this idea because of the need to reduce problems caused by cars on the road.
To begin with, The main reason why different types and alternative ways of transportation are mandatory is to reduce pollution. As we know, cars release a huge amount of toxic gases because of petrol, but these can be reduced if cars work with cleaner sources of energy. For instance, pollution is exhaust from electric cars is less and therefore if people are encouraged to drive them this will reduce pollution.
Besides, international laws should also become fully concentrated on how cars are driven and owned to decrease road accidents. Thar recent studies have shown that crimes related to cars are done by drivers who have passed the driver's license exam by giving bribes. Hence, all exams should be done under supervision. Apart from that car theft has increased also which aggravates the issue. Due to globalization, it has become relatively easy for thieves to send stolen vehicles to other countries. To deter this activity and enable these criminals to be brought to justice international laws are required. For instance, if there were a global assembled group for cars, a vehicle’s owner could be identified in any country of the world and this would prevent a stolen car from being sold in another country.
In conclusion, I totally agree that alternative types of transportation are needed to reduce pollution and that international laws are required to reduce criminal activity related to vehicles.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, may, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02180685358 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77332763358 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566978193146 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4511224885 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.466666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420238698267 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126571428605 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10106054682 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23831970129 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178615158781 0.056905535591 314% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.