Transportation is an important means to move from one place to another. There are different kinds of transportation facilities provided by the government such as railways & road transport. While some people believe that more money should be spent of railways, in my opinion, both railways as well as roads need to be prioritized equally.
In the one hand, we cannot deny the fact that Railways are a cheaper means of transport as compared to road transport such as buses and cars. They provide faster services and the problem of traffic congestion does not arise. Another advantage of Railways is that since a huge number of people travel in a single vehicle, fuel consumption is reduced and environmental pollution is at its minimum.
On the contrary, Railways do not cover all areas and therefore, we need road transport to commute from the station to the place of work or stay. In times of emergencies, roads are a more convenient and practical means of transport. For instance, a sick person cannot be carried in a railway, he needs an ambulance. Pregnant women, who need to reach the hospital on time, rely mainly of road transport such as cars and the condition of the roads is crucial for the safety of the mother and the child. School children, infants, old people and the disabled depend highly on road transport.
In conclusion, Railways are beneficial for the general public at large, however, in times of crisis as well as for the sick and the children, roads are a must. Hence, the government needs to spend equally on both rails and roads for the overall development of the country and the welfare of its people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... railways, in my opinion, both railways as well as roads need to be prioritized equally. ...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...lusion, Railways are beneficial for the general public at large, however, in times of crisis a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'as for', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28025477707 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.117834394904 0.155533422707 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0732484076433 0.0946595960268 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0509554140127 0.0501214627716 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0222929936306 0.0437548338989 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149681528662 0.122226691241 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0191082802548 0.0403226058552 47% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.73914569942 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0254777070064 0.0326793684256 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.114649681529 0.0861772015684 133% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0127388535032 0.021408717616 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0031847133758 0.011925033212 27% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1634.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 316.048096192 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81494661922 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338078291815 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252669039146 0.28420135186 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192170818505 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120996441281 0.137316102897 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73914569942 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.037074148 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526690391459 0.56093040696 94% => OK
Word variations: 52.3535804129 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6153846154 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0227820474 49.517814964 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.692307692 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07692307692 0.814263465372 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 46.88228853 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 2.35 1.69124875643 139% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0842815262695 0.332605444948 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101960056519 0.102741220458 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0704429628094 0.0668466124924 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.566784737827 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183590900708 0.148594505496 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420917456887 0.134430193775 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406085230686 0.0742795772207 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.460674142699 0.324371583561 142% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.108024305202 0.0638462369009 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066903642246 0.228012699653 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323440851132 0.058150111329 56% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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