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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Essay topics: Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is an ongoing controversy argument that whether governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. Someone disagree with investing huge amount of money on railways. However, in my opinion, I believe that spending money on railways can make more benefit than using it for roads for several reasons.

First, train is the cheaper way to travel than car or bus. People should get the valuable public transport with the minimum cost and the government should provide the sufficient support for that. For instance, in my country, the train cost only 5 pounds to travel from Bangkok to Chiangmai, compared to the bus, which cost 12 pounds. Clearly, the governments should invest on railways more to ensure that people in their countries get the reasonable public transportation.

Second, the railways’ system emit less pollution than the roads’ system. Nowadays, most cars still need oil to make to possible move. Consequently, the carbon that was produced from the car engines will damage the environment and harm the living creatures. In contrast, the trains can use other clean energy, such as electricity, to propel the train instead of oil. This innovation reduces the significant level of environment problems that humans are now terrified. So the governments ought to persuade people to use this clean technology by spending more money on the railways, rather than the roads.

In conclusion, investing on railways contributes more benefits on roads. It brings the cheaper way of transportation and causes less pollution to the environment. Despite some positive advantage of roads, I strongly believe that the world will be better if the governments invest more money on the railways.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'disagrees'.
Suggestion: disagrees
... on railways rather than roads. Someone disagree with investing huge amount of money on ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'in my opinion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.291666666667 0.247107183377 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.11858974359 0.155533422707 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0801282051282 0.0946595960268 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0384615384615 0.0501214627716 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0224358974359 0.0437548338989 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134615384615 0.122226691241 110% => OK
Participles: 0.025641025641 0.0403226058552 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83265546634 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0352564102564 0.0326793684256 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.099358974359 0.0861772015684 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0288461538462 0.021408717616 135% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00641025641026 0.011925033212 54% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1719.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 316.048096192 86% => OK
Chars per words: 6.2967032967 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.417582417582 0.374742101984 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296703296703 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21978021978 0.203846283523 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139194139194 0.137316102897 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83265546634 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575091575092 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 59.638387496 60.7387585426 98% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0625 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1049596205 49.517814964 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4375 127.492653851 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 0.814263465372 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 46.7328296703 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 2.51785714286 1.69124875643 149% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237160242923 0.332605444948 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0827646653245 0.102741220458 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0549238073559 0.0668466124924 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.557875104519 0.534860350844 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131199229819 0.148594505496 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113353314768 0.134430193775 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875139979877 0.0742795772207 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.371083116158 0.324371583561 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.171956971126 0.0638462369009 269% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18865727897 0.228012699653 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878395996173 0.058150111329 151% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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