Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Happiness is the part of our human's wellbeing that cannot be achieved in a sort of enriching wealthy or by seeing other opponents' lose. Sometimes, a billionaire suffers most from a disease that causes him standing far from money pleasure. In that way, the term of happiness cannot be easy to describe but some research found that is possibly managed.
To cover what is about happiness lets concern first about in which ways man can be suffered most, then we can conclude the source of joy. In the middle ages, the colonialists ruled the world and all human beings excluded far from freedom. They got daily terrorized by military abuse. The number of happiness of the world in that time declined in only 10% presumably. After war wold ended, human rejoin their selves with joyfulness and reunited into their rights. From that history, we can learn that freedom causes man to be happy. However, it sacrificed by many drops of blood, and many fathers did not return to their homes. So happiness can be reached but many stairs to step in.
Some researchers say that there is no bold conclusion on what is happiness. If we ask people, they would answer vary. Some of them say that happy is money or watching someone your love smile or elevating jobs position. Because of its varieties and relativities, the happiness is hard to define. In spite of that, psychologists have been tried to connect those dots answering patterns and conclude that happiness is the result of the emotion of what we successfully hoping for. So that finding makes sense to why people always found happiness differently through a period of time as I described earlier in paragraph two.
Above all, I conclude that happiness only can be achieved with a struggle and many sacrifices. Moreover, even though there is no straight answer about happiness' definition, it can be meant by result emotion on what human wish for. When it is successfully achieved then joy could be preserved, but if is reversely happened then the pain will occur.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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...sely happened then the pain will occur.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, sort of, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83188405797 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5957585814 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576811594203 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5295525601 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.35 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176866730217 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555307291474 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449013583175 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116907104022 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032141519168 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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