It is no doubt true that the majority of people want to live a happy life. While there are difficulties in explaining the nature of happiness, it seems that most of us human share similar needs in regard to achieving or finding happiness.
There are various reasons why happiness is hard to define accurately. One of the reasons is due to the fact that happiness is an emotional state and an abstract idea, making it hard to depict in words as it is unphysical and invisible. Moreover, everyone has different mental states, as well as characteristics, therefore they have distinct approaches to the idea of “being happy”. For instance, “having uncounted millions of dollars” is usually adults’ definition of happiness, whereas it is seldom children’s. For example, I personally love to play video games while my mother not only hates it but also frequently addressed it as a “waste of time”.
Many people claim that in order to experience happiness, at least human basic needs or even psychological needs have to be fulfilled. This means that we must have a well-paying job, foods to eat, somewhere to stay and so on. On the other hand, for some people, dependable relationships with family and peers outweigh other requirements because nothing matters if we do not have someone to share our experiences with. Although in my experience, happiness is neither about fulfilling our desires nor establishing connections but rather to be satisfied with what we have and also embrace it.
In sum, happiness is a state of mind where it is filled with positive or pleasant emotions and what creates it depends on oneself. While many people think that accomplishing what we need is the only way to be happy, there are other ideas such as having a family and reliable friends or life satisfaction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 664, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... it but also frequently addressed it as a 'waste of time'. Many peopl...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reliable friends or life satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, at least, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, as well as, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11221122112 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10691674008 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607260726073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.450559124 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.153846154 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3846153846 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128342002737 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053980248425 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515245268111 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754806287885 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149618484491 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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