The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
In today's competitive era, pace of life increased and cost of living increasing day by day. Nowadays people do further study also besides their job. No matter what people choose their career and education, both are equally important to live comfortable in modern era. I strongly believe having couple of careers is better for us benefits to our society.
To begin with, we live in technological world. Standard of living of people has improved. We can see our past generation people, they were less job opportunities then. There was no sense or fear of competition among individuals. Nowadays people have lots of opportunities for education and jobs. Some people do job also and do part-time study because all people wants promotion in certain age. For example, a company manager have to handle all the department such as production field, financial matter, knowledge about sales and marketing. If they want to become manager in company, the manager position requires some additional degree and job experience. That's the reason many people do both activities. There are many engineers who pass out in IT, Mechanical, civil field, but if they wants to get higher position level in multination company they have to do some further education like MBA, financial courses.
The several ways of earning money afford people to broad their horizons by infinite studying.This way implies that you won’t stop at the top and will always obtain diverse educations and skills. There are many popular people example in modern world, who choose their career in many field to become successful and famous person. For example Dwayne Johnson, he was football player and he ditched the football career and won many championship but he joined World wrestling federation (WWF) and become very famous WWF star. But he won't stop and he also selected in Film industries and did many successful movies like the fast and the furious franchises. These people earn lots of money and make fame in world. It is people choice what they want to do to earn money and live luxury life. Nowadays people should to have additional skills besides the educational to earn more money and survive in competitive world, if people stop learning , then they leg behind form others.
In conclusion, It is essential requirement for people to do more than one career and further education and additional skills are also important for people and their growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...eople, they were less job opportunities then. There was no sense or fear of competit...
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Line 3, column 657, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...e additional degree and job experience. Thats the reason many people do both activiti...
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Line 3, column 788, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...T, Mechanical, civil field, but if they wants to get higher position level in multina...
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...he several ways of earning money afford people to broad their horizons by infinite stu...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...oad their horizons by infinite studying.This way implies that you won't stop at...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fields'.
Suggestion: many fields
...odern world, who choose their career in many field to become successful and famous person....
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Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun championship seems to be countable; consider using: 'many championships'.
Suggestion: many championships
... he ditched the football career and won many championship but he joined World wrestling federatio...
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Line 5, column 936, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mpetitive world, if people stop learning , then they leg behind form others. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07268170426 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62470950774 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541353383459 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8716674897 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1363636364 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152938585145 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462695983022 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425603844027 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10051400467 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332218145094 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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