With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text message, face to face communication will become a thing of the past.
To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, the population of using new technology for instance, internet, social media and text messaging increasing day by day. People are aware about to use this technology plays the vital role in current time. Higher number of population proportion can access the high number of new technologies. It is argued that in the modern age, people has been using new communication techniques for interacting with relatives and friends rather than face to face interactions, however, I agree this with the statement people need to use the new technology for interaction with others. There are lots of benefits for accessing internet overwhelming than negative aspects.
Firstly, with this technology helps us to interact others within a second without spending any more costs. It saves valuable time and share all thing within a minute. Moreover, people are more aware about the latest technique and technology. They know that how technology make a life easier from the complex one. For example, Facebook is most easier social networking media where we can chat with friends, share photos, doing video chatting and etc. Additionally, we can interact more than one person at one time and share them with our views and thoughts. Also, People using this technology for advertisement they can promote their product easily and increase the popularity of the brands. Although, there are some drawbacks of this technology, sometimes it may difficult to keep a privacy. Some of the children and younger spend more time on social media and internet that really effects on their education. Therefore, the communicating via internet and text makes easier to interact & communicate easily.
On the other hands, face to face communication also is beneficial to the humankind. People can get an opportunity to meet new people, helps to increase the skills, interaction capacity and build up the confidence level. This method people can share the accurate and relevant information. Also, people became more active while they meet new and knowledgeable people, however, its takes more time while waiting and interacting people. Moreover, people could suffer from some rampant diseases while meet with new people.
In conclusion, communicating with new technology via internet and test message has more benefit than face to face interactions. People easily share their thought, views and ideas to others without spending more time and money. Using new technology make a life easier human. So that, communicating with people from internet and text is far better option than direct interactions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...e complex one. For example, Facebook is most easier social networking media where we can ch...
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Line 2, column 441, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...nds, share photos, doing video chatting and etc. Additionally, we can interact more than...
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Line 2, column 792, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...mes it may difficult to keep a privacy. Some of the children and younger spend more time on...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.286652078775 0.247107183377 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.129102844639 0.155533422707 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105032822757 0.0946595960268 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0371991247265 0.0501214627716 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.035010940919 0.0437548338989 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118161925602 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0371991247265 0.0403226058552 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78685605226 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0262582056893 0.0326793684256 80% => OK
Particles: 0.00218818380744 0.00163938923432 133% => OK
Determiners: 0.074398249453 0.0861772015684 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0175054704595 0.021408717616 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00656455142232 0.011925033212 55% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2576.0 1933.35771543 133% => OK
No of words: 407.0 316.048096192 129% => OK
Chars per words: 6.32923832924 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20517956788 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.388206388206 0.374742101984 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272727272727 0.28420135186 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.216216216216 0.203846283523 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142506142506 0.137316102897 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78685605226 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.037074148 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503685503686 0.56093040696 90% => OK
Word variations: 55.5978164435 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0891783567 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.9583333333 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9563388173 49.517814964 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 127.492653851 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9583333333 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.708333333333 0.814263465372 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 44.2310606061 49.1944974215 90% => OK
Elegance: 2.19565217391 1.69124875643 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358439771652 0.332605444948 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0831045853827 0.102741220458 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0680307529023 0.0668466124924 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.442738968124 0.534860350844 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124576318625 0.148594505496 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12211952395 0.134430193775 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934756054004 0.0742795772207 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.344338296518 0.324371583561 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0377064645673 0.0638462369009 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252129538104 0.228012699653 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380677314879 0.058150111329 65% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.68436873747 207% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 5.90881763527 271% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 10.4468937876 191% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9