The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?
It is true that Internet has rapidly developed and had huge influences on every aspect of our lives in recent years. There remain some conversational conflicts between advocates and opponents who think both negatively and positively about impacts of Internet for us. I personally believe that its advantages outweigh drawbacks which vice versa also need taking into account.
On the one hand, it is indisputable to reject benefits with the use of Internet. Firstly, there is a huge diversity of classified information, education as well as work related subjects in particular, available on online platform. People irrespective of ages might get access to those easily; in other words, online data are updated instantly and easy to be tracked via a few simple clicks without too much complexity or professional skills. Secondly, fast pace of Internet development has created a vast amount of apps provided to facilitate both micron and large scale types of communication namely social networking. Users regardless of geographic gap can be effortlessly accessible to information with each other within seconds compared to days or even months by conventional mailing methods like written lettering by post.
On the other hand, negative aspects of Internet still remain and should not be ignored despite its aforementioned positive impacts. At first, the more social networking communities expand, the more risk that personal life of those users are stolen by hackers. Crimes, especially financial ones, take advantage of both open and close information through hacking Internet banking platform to blackmail or thieve money by illegitimate identification on behalf of banking owners. Finally, people now a days spend more time on online communicating, chatting with their friends, which might turn themselves into isolated ones. In addition, social isolation resulting from virtual life addiction can make people become far distant, lack conversational skill which could lead to the shortage of self-confidence when those individuals have to face to each other in reality.
In conclusion, the advantages brought by Internet is incontrovertible, the negative aspects however are also unpredictable and need to be paid more attention by public.
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... of banking owners. Finally, people now a days spend more time on online communicating...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, as well as, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56268221574 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07609328064 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66472303207 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1708773798 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.285714286 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7857142857 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0571892759384 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0205590305294 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0224226213841 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0374130528256 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020774153178 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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