It is commonly thought that it is healthy for adults to maintain an outside interest in order to relax or stay fit. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of 3 of the following sports and pastimes:
tennis
walking
museums
a club
a gym
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The existing sedentary lifestyle has egged on people’s eagerness to do more outdoor exercises. While there are a variety of go-to activities, it’s not likely that everybody can have the same pastimes. If anyone wants to get the ball rolling, they have to know what they’re getting into.
Many people hail tennis as the most suitable sports for weight loss and agility improvement. What can be expected more from a sport where they have to run to catch up with the shuttlecock and wave their hands flexibly amid the air? This sport is an exciting exercise for everybody to challenge themselves. However, it also requires at least two players in the field and a compendious space; also, it is drastically affected by the weather, which can inconvenience participants.
On the other hand, people might waver when it comes to walking since this activity offers better benefits. They can traipse through everywhere they want as well as go sightseeing simultaneously. Walking doesn’t require much intensity and high endurance like tennis, so people might do it everywhere they want. Nevertheless, it will take them more time to gain the results.
Going to museums seems to pick up these days. While participants can gain edification and collate knowledge about distinct denizens, eras, and cultures; these activities are deemed delicacies to the brain, yet, conspicuously on the façade, it doesn’t train their bodies much and little health adjustments will be attained.
In the meantime, a club or a gym seems to perk up ordinary tempo of life. Clubs range from art to sports, which can provide abundant choices. Yet, these groups will consist of plethora of people that can divest members of concentration due to the miscellany of the place. A gym, on the other hand, acts on getting people to boost their own stamina and body constitution. Better equipment will be catered there to give people the best services, which can be much convenient for them. But the intensity and duress gymnastics provide perhaps are the best pretext for others to give up on their own.
In conclusion, people should make up their mind before actually taking up any of these because no matter what their choices are and how efficacious the pastime is, the thing they need the most is perseverance and compatibility.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... is perseverance and compatibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, while, at least, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09448818898 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77963041257 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603674540682 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6494281763 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.05 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0943544495803 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331194304834 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411446688574 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0434680988375 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429696958827 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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