Nurturing children is a fundamental issue both in family and society. Furthermore, personality of each child is formed in the first three years of his/her life, and distinguishing between right and wrong should be educated from childhood in order to prevent from probable disasters. Also, proper ways of punishment except the body punishment can be effective.
As children easily socialize, they are more in dangerous positions than other age groups because tricky ways of conceiving them are not comprehend by their mind. Therefore, unfortunately, they trust in aliens more than their parents and tutors. Their limited minds causes this and in majority of times educational advices don’t matter while punishment methods can be very practical.
There are many behavioral and psychological punishment methods that can be done for educating purposes. Depriving a child from his/her interested plaything, preventing him/her from watching cartoons, and stopping to do anything that he/she is fond f it, all can be considered by parents. Furthermore, tutors in nursery schools encouraging children by presents or claps should avoid these activities for a child ignoring his/her advices whereas continue encouraging others intentionally.
To sum up, children’s limited minds should significantly be considered and it should be reminded to parents, relatives and teachers. For educating right and wrong, body punishment and any vigorous behaviors that can have drastic mental and psychological disorders should be avoided. Probable risks and dangers can be considered and parenting necessity educational classes must be held by government’s supervision in order to confront with any problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'comprehended'.
Suggestion: comprehended
... tricky ways of conceiving them are not comprehend by their mind. Therefore, unfortunately...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77380952381 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10061346428 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623015873016 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3557349922 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14836423734 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060430493774 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312987478531 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940334104516 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177765226892 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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