It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teacher be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?
Teaching children to distinguish what is right and what is wrong as early as possible is very important. I do agree that punishments can be used in an effective way to assist parents in teach their children.
Punishment can be applied in teaching children the society norms because of some reasons. Firstly, it helps children aware of doing the wrong things clearly. They will avoid doing bad things because they are scared of being punished; thus, the second commit can be reduced. Secondly, bad actions are inevitable for children. When they are punished, they will remember longer the bad thing they should not do.
Punishment can support parents in teaching their children but violence is not allowed. Moreover, people should punish children only when they do bad actions in purpose or repeatedly. If children do wrong thing accidentally or because of lack of knowledge, parents should explain to them first. Parents should punish children by taking their favorite activities or let them do other good things. For example, if children do not sleep on time, punish them by taking one hour of their television time or if your child bullies a friend, let them say “sorry” to the friend and gift the friend something.
In conclusion, children should know the right and the wrong in their early age and punishment in a right way will be a great support for parents to guide their children in a right way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96234309623 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63607624197 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506276150628 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.653551362 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2307692308 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284272084414 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12370052184 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061030072194 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202776486331 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630600347575 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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