It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
It is believed that punishment is the best way to help the children to differentiate between good and bad. I agree with the mentioned statement. However, the choice of punishment should be constructive rather than destructive. In the following essay, we will discuss the positive impact of punishment on the behaviour and different types to maximise the psychological health.
Firstly, it is the human nature to refrain from doing an act that he was punished before in the life. The fear of getting scolded or even beaten prevents the young from repeating the same things. For example, if a child has been scolded for punishing, he will think about it twice when doing it again. Similarly, a child’s mind is not mature enough to foresee the future consequences of certain acts. Parents in such cases find it difficult to explain the future effects. Punishment in such circumstances helps to prevent them doing the bad acts. For instance, youth may ignore the health outcomes of smoking but the fear of confrontation with parent forces them to think twice before doing so.
On the other hand, the punishment should have a learning perspective. Spending extra time in a productive way will have a better, long-term and positive outcome. For instance, community services like cleaning or helping out in the school library are far better options than a physical beating. Moreover, the children can be given a task to read informative books. This will enlighten their minds and will have an everlasting psychological benefit.
In conclusion, the punishment is without a doubt, an essential aspect of child's upbringing provided that it is done in a productive manner. I agree with the topic. In future, the government needs to formulate laws against the physical assault and to create awareness among masses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09764309764 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87050415874 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599326599327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.097940785 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6842105263 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6315789474 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244999349466 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695231977091 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521427696633 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130923619038 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375063063551 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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