Leaving in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree

To live in a place where you don't know the local language may cause some issues, such as business matters. I completely agree with this statement and will give my reasons below.
First of all, I believe that communication is very crucial and it might be a serious problem in this case. Even if someone has to live somewhere, but can't speak in a native tongue, it creates difficulties for him or her. While a person is a non-native speaker, she or he hasn't got many things to share with nation people. For example, it is hard for them to ask a question or finding a location. Therefore, it is more essential to know some common language from the living place.
On the other hand, finding a job is another problem for non-natives. A large number of employers look for native speakers because strangers get problems to understand everything. Secondly, health can be the next issue, so the patient isn't able to explain his\her feeling to a doctor. For instance, Jhon Brick, an American businessman went to Africa for work and had some health problems. Cause of not knowing the local language he had to back to his country for treatment. Thus, if a person decides to stay somewhere for a long time, she\he must learn some regional vocabulary.
To conclude, the point of my view, living in a place where you have to talk a foreign language can occur some practical problems, such as communication and finding a job

Votes
Average: 8.7 (3 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.648 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65680710628 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5785911487 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178383346182 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057220085732 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604699036245 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123034832527 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571381079776 0.056905535591 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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