It is agreed that, art holds vital role in traditions from past history throughout the countries where as, today people neglected art for modern aspects such as Science, technology and business. This essay will examine the main causes of changing minds of people about art for modern factors and will enlighten possible solutions.
The two main causes of lost interest in art are rapid advancement in technology and materialistic mindset of people. Previously, people used to paint with brilliant colours to save the memory by portraying court scenes, scenes of battle and other aspects of social life to gift there loved ones but today vast applications on mobile phones has improvised everyone's way of recalling memories through selfie's. Also, now people live in fantasy ora they have long-list of desires to be fulfilled and live luxoriours life by earning huge sum of money and don't have considerable amount of time to be spent on leisure activities like dance, music etc. For instance, scientists spend majority of their life in scientific lab's examining sun's temperature to keep themselves updated instead of spending quality time on drawing sunset scene will be of no use to them.
Some possible solutions to this problem are promote awareness among people and establishment of social art clubes. By awareness among people about art they will be connected to humanity and culture and that will connect them to community the live in. For example, it will enhance the relationship among people and make them even stronger. Moreover, the next step in gattering peoples attention towards art by organising competition in social art clubs through this people's ora of knowledge and interest will be re-built.
To conclude, art is inevitable part of human's life, with no art practises are cultural heritage will be lost. However, changing views of people can be re-established by enlighting people about its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21612903226 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72695146785 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606451612903 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6059105112 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.75 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157104597303 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656701187564 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247701354681 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106046234229 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162120503534 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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