The main aim of advertising campaign is to increase sales of a certain product, but people don’t really need it. To what extent you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion and relevant examples.
There is no escape from the fact that the advertisement campaign’s profound purpose is to stimulate more people to buy a specific product. Although it might seem that this industry encourages people to buy the equipment that they do not need, I personally am of the opinion that these advertisements could be considered as a didactic approach to make each member of society familiar with his unrecognized needs.
On one hand, I understand why some people believe that the advertisement campaign feeds the society with irrelevent information. Every day all of us are being bombarded with a myriad of advertisement which are not of our interest. For example a person already possessing a state of the art mobile phone may receive an advert about another model of digital phone which brings about fewer functionalities compared to the one that he already has. These types of general purpose adverts, if perpetuated to excess would disturb a vast majority of citizens, despite the fact that some may benefit from those advertisements.
On the other hand, however, I would side with those who believe that advertisement campaign has some boons in its favor. Firstly, regarding the advent of new technology industry, scientists in different fields are trying to enhance the people’s life style to become more fruitful for all members of society. For Instance, the new brand apple devices bring about a great deal of new experiences that people cannot even imagine. Advert for such products not only are beneficial for people but also would foster a society’s standard of living, although seeming to be irrelevant from some individual’s point of view. Secondly, these types of campaign are beneficial since they equip members of a society with a more well-rounded perspective on latest technologies.
By way of conclusion, I disagree that advertisement campaign do not bring about any advantages to the people.
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... about any advantages to the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27508090615 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1254630683 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585760517799 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4191766418 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.833333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145680280969 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592353807833 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437624263652 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989331436474 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360115269717 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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