In many big cities in the world, the quality of life is decreasing. What are the causes and solutions for this?
There are several factors explain why in many big cities in the world, the quality of life is decreasing. Personally, I believe that this can be handled by adopting a number of solutions, as will now me presented.
Perhaps the first problem is the degrading quality of the environment in major cities. the rapid increase in industrial activities and high density of traffic, which leads to the growing amount of gas emission from factories and exhaust fume from vehicles that are reliesed in to surrounrdings. This threats the health of general population. For example, the quality of air in Beijing has dramatically reduced recently due to the expansion of production and the rising volume of private cars. Therefore, the number of people suffering from health problems related to diseases like lung and throat cancer is on the rise.
Secondly, People in cities are likely to be stressed. The labor market has been increasingly competitive due to the migration of rural people to urban areas to seucre jobs.So, city dwellers have to make concerted efforts to avoid being threatened with dismissal. As a result, they are likely to experience mental illness such as depression and anxiety.
However, a range of options available can be used to combat the issues. One measure would be that government should ecourage fatories and companies move to the countryside and people to use public transport rather than private vehicles. This certaintly contributes to the improvement of air quality in big cities. . Another remedy is that people in cities should engage in more physical activities outdoors instead of spending much time working. This allows them to have more chances to relax and entertain, reducing the level of stress.
In conclusion, various measures should be taken to solve the problem caused by the decrease in quality of life in many big cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17434210526 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75430131961 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1697400353 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3125 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252636837691 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802432258367 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112928368826 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152427535595 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105220679574 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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