Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Nowadays, the lifestyles of the future generation have changed considerably in comparison with before due to several reasons and many people, including me, believe that it tends to become unhealthy. To deal with this issue, I agree that both schools and parents should share equal responsibility.
Firstly, parents have the greatest influence on the forming of children’s lifestyle. When life becomes busier, many parents are often caught up in work and neglect to take good care of their children. Consequently, children are getting used to eating fast foods, mostly staying at home without physical movement and overusing gadgets. Therefore, parents should change their lifestyle, spend more time for their children as well as be a good model to help the youngsters avoid unhealthy habits. For instance, a family can do exercise together, cook at home or they ought to spend time caring and managing to limit the time their kids spending on electronic devices.
Secondly, schools need to tackle to improve the quality of children's life, educate them a healthy and social lifestyle. From my perspective, there should be lessons to raise their awareness about the negative impacts of poorly scientific eating habits, lack of physical movement and even the hazard of drugs, alcoholism, and so on. Furthermore, sports classes or outdoor, teamwork activities might be organized to improve health and help children connect with each other.
In conclusion, even negative lifestyles are a problem of modern society, I strongly believe that if parents and schools join hands this situation can be improved.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36363636364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78626690902 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4682234513 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.363636364 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24413442937 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092193356482 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677610502563 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138426002038 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487909661776 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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