In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing.
What do you think are the main causes of crime?
How can we deal with those causes?
While people have more and more developments of life condition, the growth of sins all around the world is happening including killing, stealing, robbing, kidnapping, rape… etc. In this essay, I will present the main cause of offense and offer some methods to solve those problems.
The global issues are the crisis of economic and distinct division between rich households and poor households what are happening. Because of the crisis, the number of unemployed people is increasing so some persons decided to join gangs and go to stealing and robbing. In addition, some households do not pleased with their property and that is why more and more riots are happening all around the world. Besides those opinions, many persons think that they can gain more fame and social media will update more information of them to other people if they give more challenges to the government and army through violence and creating more sins.
Another important question is: How can we overcome crime in our society? In my opinion, I think the government should pay more attention to each area. For example, the quantity development of policemen with modern equipment for each area is one of the effective ways to manage areas, protect inhabitants easily and deal with accidents when they are going to happen. Furthermore, educating students about awareness at schools is one of the methods to reduce those causes in the future.
Inhabitants need more assistance and attention from the government to deal with social problems and gain more conditional improvements. Overall, this is the vital situation what the government have to solve those problems.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16104868914 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65945559537 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8873035507 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186749972187 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065864142724 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520587398201 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107176801275 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492303240771 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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