In many countries, children are engaged in some kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What‘s your opinion?
Child labor is increasing in many countries while some people think that it would bring harm to children, others believe that children can gain some benefits from their paid works. In my opinion, age – appropriate jobs help children learn many things.
On the one hand, unsuitable jobs have negative effects on children. First of all, children’s health is influenced by exhausting work. For example, children working hours in factory suffer physical diseases. In addition, many accidents occurred injuring children on the job. Moreover, paid work can harm children’s social and educational development. They have less time for their study and social activities, so they are likely to feel overwhelmed.
On the other hand, children can have many advantages from appropriate works. Gaining some experience in suitable jobs can motivate children to study and help them discover their interest and talents. For instance, children who love pet feel exciting when they become a pet sitter. Additionally, jobs for children can help kids learn about responsibility and money management. They will have chance to understand that if they work hard, they will get money. Besides, children will also know how to spend money appropriately. For example, kids can spend money which they receive from helping their mother do housework buy their toys.
In conclusion, although some people think that it is completely wrong for children to be employed in paid jobs, I believe they can get a wide range of benefit from age – approximate works.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32653061224 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79811919934 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579591836735 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3480253829 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5625 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3125 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248605773116 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927568248201 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600624007626 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181647047944 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509369080747 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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