In many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Child obesity is growing concern for many parts of the world. There are various reasons for this issue and the parental and governmental support would be required to solve this issue.
Children became fat because of unhealthy eating habits. Many households have bad eating habits and these can pass down to their children to form such habit. For example, majority of American had consumed junk food frequently in 2000s and as a result, nowadays many households are consuming junk foods as a regular meal which resulting in youth obesity.
Furthermore, nowadays, children have lesser time playing outdoors or conducting regular exercises. Since children are addicted to the comfortable modern lifestyles, they do not feel necessary to participate doing exercises. For instance, modern children are spent vast amount of time playing with their computers and mobile phones as a part of their leisure activities.
To solve this issue, parental guidance and supervision seems to be required. By setting the certain time frames to play on electronic devices and play outdoors can be helpful to children to reduce their weights. Also, parents can control over children’s eating habits to reduce the junk food intakes.
Another approach can be used to help child obesity is from the government. By restricting the hours of junk food restaurants’ selling foods to children can reduce the obesity rates significantly. In the case of Australian fast food restaurants such as McDonalds, cannot serve students during and before the dinner time as it is under the government policies. As a result of this, the weight of Australian children has reduced.
In conclusion, there are an increasing number of children who are overweighted around the globe. Unhealthy eating habits and lesser time doing exercises are considered as the primary reason for youth obesity. Therefore, the parents and the government’s help would be sought to solve this issue.
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Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 2000s'.
Suggestion: in the 2000s
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38636363636 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89337089321 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548701298701 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7249869329 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14944849745 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542695691906 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362849251434 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833772734979 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180447263984 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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