Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some would argue that progress in diverse areas are required for country, while others opine that more attention need to be focused on country’s economic development. Although economic growth has much of importance, I strongly believe that a country will be sustainability developed if it is enhanced in all political and social fields in addition to economic one.
There are three key reasons why economic growth is seen as a fundamental goal for countries. Firstly, the more economy grows, the more job opportunities create and the higher salary is given to citizen. Take North Korea, which its economic development has been retarded by international sanctions for almost a 20-year period, for example. A large number of its inhabitants has been suffering from lack of enough vacancies and also experiencing some difficulties in international trading. Secondly, economic progress ensures the availability of high amount of financial resources for government so as to be spent on infrastructure and public services such as transportation, public health, insurance system etc. Finally, an economically developed country benefits from its wide economic relations with other countries, resulting in great influential political relations.
On the other hand, it is too narrow as an approach to limit development concept just into economic progress. From the social science point of view, social welfare and environmental concerns are two suitable factors can measure how a society is developed. Welfare concept includes all political, social, economic and cultural conditions. How much a society and a government respect to the human rights, personal freedoms, social security and democracy not only are in same importance as economic factors but they also are driving forces behind any sustainable economic success. Furthermore, a society is developed, to whom environment protection means everything and therefore all developments have to be environmentally sustainable.
To recapitulate, economic development of a country seems worthwhile; nonetheless, different sorts of progress such as political and social are as significant as economic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...r almost a 20-year period, for example. A large number of its inhabitants has been suffering from...
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Line 3, column 595, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...t of financial resources for government so as to be spent on infrastructure and public s...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'nonetheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'in addition', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247222222222 0.247107183377 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.136111111111 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.166666666667 0.0946595960268 176% => OK
Adverbs: 0.05 0.0501214627716 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0194444444444 0.0437548338989 44% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116666666667 0.122226691241 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0444444444444 0.0403226058552 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.26113477182 2.80594681477 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025 0.0326793684256 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0666666666667 0.0861772015684 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00833333333333 0.021408717616 39% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0138888888889 0.011925033212 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2154.0 1933.35771543 111% => OK
No of words: 320.0 316.048096192 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.73125 6.12580529183 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.471875 0.374742101984 126% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.396875 0.28420135186 140% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.3125 0.203846283523 153% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.196875 0.137316102897 143% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26113477182 2.80594681477 116% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.037074148 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615625 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 71.4339751851 60.7387585426 118% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.8571428571 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7842902485 49.517814964 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.857142857 127.492653851 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7743622355 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 0.814263465372 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 62.5446428571 49.1944974215 127% => OK
Elegance: 1.98648648649 1.69124875643 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217193247298 0.332605444948 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0891889222826 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.060764572466 0.0668466124924 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.510698368099 0.534860350844 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190055649712 0.148594505496 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875365113718 0.134430193775 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456614169962 0.0742795772207 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.27849470744 0.324371583561 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0207277114124 0.0638462369009 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156499084676 0.228012699653 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329365806081 0.058150111329 57% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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