Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
According to many government officials, economic development is the crucial step in achieving success of a nation although others argue that there are several other aspects of development which need to highlighted as well. Although I think a country needs peace and tranquility as well as support of bordering countries in order to become a successful state, without financial stability everything will become a moot point.
With a balanced economy, a government can provide for each and every need of the citizens of a country. Gaining economic progress means no one lives under the poverty line which implies everybody gets a healthy and active lifestyle. Consequently, the price of daily necessities will be affordable to everyone. Moreover, the unemployment rate will be dropped and the rate of self-employment will hike up as well. As a result, the the income per capita will increase. In addition, the nation would not have to ask for funding from other richer nations in time of needs like natural disasters but rather give a helping hand. For example, a relatively small territory in Asia, Bangladesh has come a long way since its independence by focusing on gaining economic security.
On the other hand, a country needs to use all its resources accurately in order to be known to the world. For example, Hawaii, an small state of the USA, has gain global recognition by utilizing the exquisite nature of the island and exciting culture. Neighbouring countries can help in prosper as well. Egypt, an relatively affluent land in the past, lost all her glory as a result of ignoring the peace it had with the adjunct communities. However, if a war break out, many of these countries will be immediately under attack as they lack financial progress and there is a chance no other state would provide a helping hand to them as well.
In conclusion, education, nature and a good friendship will certainly help a country to become progressive but nothing will be regarded as a success if it fails in getting economic progress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99705882353 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87816472425 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6705804969 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.266666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158674974691 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490326294237 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389594238881 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104277648788 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127940708305 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.