Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging
people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Many have debating the advantages and disadvantages of charging visitors to admit by museums. While
there is a clearly drawback for it, I personally believe that the benefits are more significant.
To begin with, one of the demerits which can be mentioned for those museums that are not free, would
be fewer visitors. While visiting museums which is a significant part of each culture is becoming less
popular, more persuasive measure should be taken to encourage people for visiting museums. As
economical condition is getting worth, people usually prefer to spend their money on their more
important requirement and prevent extra expenses and alongside that cultural activities have not been
paid enough attention, the majority of population notice visiting museums as an extra one which is not
significant and they would not pay for it. Encouraging people to take part in this activity would not
become practical unless financial schemes such as great discounts or being free from charge are
considered.
On the other hand, charging people for admission has a considerable merit and it is ability of offering
better services to visitors. To give some services: maintenance, extra related-activities and more
powerful safety plans that are really significant for museums, they need to a great deal of budget.
Despite helps by government, many of them need more money for their expenses that are necessary for
great services. So, the more money people pay for visiting a museum, the more qualifies services
museums can offer.
In conclusion the advantages are of greater significance of disadvantages. Although free museums can
be more available to public, the quality of given services would be lessened in those units.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38181818182 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87919639845 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556363636364 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3615168651 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322402615448 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126418319487 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656829896268 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101615934693 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838406524219 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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