Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that many museums charge some entry free for their spectators, while going to the museum exhibit center. However, i accept that this dos and don't s has some positive impact for the User.I believe that this key factor is more helpful to maintain the resources in the museum.
To begin with, charging people in access the museum has some detrimental effects for the visitor. The first and most reason is that all are not capable to bear a good chunk of money in entrance the museum.Moreover,children has a lot of eagerness to go this healthy place.If,in general, the executive body emphasize to bound in giving the entry charge. As a result, they cannot access to enhance their knowledge in watching various pristine heritages, which is more valuable to know in their early age.During the tender age, for example, scientists suggested that all students should know about the world and their norms, traditions, cultures, which can provided a worthwhile place that are in the museum. In other words, most of the museum are undertaken in getting the governing fund.Therefore,charging policy is one of the barrier to enjoy these amenities.Furthermore, to make the effective citizen is more inevitable to have the same opportunity for individual in accessible in the museum.It is noteworthy that some booming economical countries give opportunity in their citizens in free appear in enjoying their heritages. Hence, charging money in the museum not only disappear enhance their knowledge in essence areas but also hindrance in growing their creativity in different fields.Notwithstanding,some museums consider that it is a source of revenue.
On the other hand, despite the negative consequence in charging policy ,I believe that to defense these ancient heritage is more responsibilities for the museum to give the right security service. Besides, a museum has various types of natural resources ,for which these valuable items need to maintain profuse amount of money apart from state funding.There are many eminent museum in the world,The British museum, for instance, has numerous types of ancient fossils, which has been researching for ages that require various chemical items .Although,for buying these chemical have to invest a lot of dollars in every year ,which is not solely possible for the government to invest in this sector.Therefore, charging policy helps them to maintain these valuable items.In other words, the museum can attract a lot of tourists in every year, which is the source of revenue.Louvre museum in Paris, as an example, exhibit different sort of ancient heritages, for watching these aesthetic beauty, many tourists go to that place,which increase the annual revenue in this museum.
In conclusion, it seems to me the charging policy in the museum has it merits. I would like to say that its merits far better than that of demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, sort of, as a result, in other words, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2422.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 462.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24242424242 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22828223488 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497835497835 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 763.2 506.74238477 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 222.183008478 49.4020404114 450% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 220.181818182 106.682146367 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.0 20.7667163134 202% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.8181818182 7.06120827912 309% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332542093134 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153084086603 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100252228486 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215623454751 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669282145005 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.3 13.0946893788 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.0 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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