Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to handle this problem?
For government, it always plays in the priority role to reduce the crime rate. However, many crime are committed by people who had been first punished before. Why those criminals start to reoffend after leaving prison? And what measures could governments do to decline this possibility? This essay will discuss both questions.
The first reason for why criminals reoffend is that they cannot reintegrate into society after spending long time in prison. Many criminals are isolated and it is impossible for them to know what had happened outside the prison, especially when they are sentenced to a long time imprisonment. And after leaving prison, they not only have no skills to make a living but also feel incompatible with modern society, therefore it is too easy for them to slide into crime once again. Moreover, people’s prejudice against criminals make it easy for them to recommit crime. Public always tend to suspect people who have made mistakes, which increases negative emotion to them. Some irritable person is highly likely to commit a crime again if he or she is isolated or shamed.
There are various measures that can effectively to deal with this issue. Firstly, it is important to ensure that all criminals are given a chance of training which can help them get a job after leaving prison. Also, it is necessary to supervise those released criminals so that the government can give assistance when necessary. These solutions can prevent those people crime again.
In conclusion, it is important to let criminals return to society and also capable to earn money which is enough to raise themselves. I believe it can decrease reoffend and crime rate will soon drop.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun crime seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much crime', 'a good deal of crime'.
Suggestion: much crime; a good deal of crime
...role to reduce the crime rate. However, many crime are committed by people who had been fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08928571429 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62130206001 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582142857143 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5867930862 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8235294118 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209973797768 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742286438609 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529559059507 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138333313873 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810719092692 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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