There is no doubt springtime is a milestone for everyone. It is a time that young people should decide to live on their own or by their parents. In this regard, the imperative question is mostly positive or not?
On the one hand, living away from parents has several benefits for the young generation. First and most apparently, it helps them to think more independently. That is to say, after leaving home they are the only ones that make the decision about their life devoid of any parents' interference. For example, when my brother left home, he decides to immigrate and follows his own ambitions, while before that my parents disagreed with him. This made this opportunity for him to gain valuable experience and broaden his horizons. Secondly, this is an opportunity to learn different skills. Financial management is a case in point, they have to manage their money to afford their cost of living. Therefore, if youths leave home at young ages they can gain a variety of skills, whereas they are mostly free from the responsibility of family and so they have plenty of time.
However, having said that, many parents are worry about this because their offsprings might be not mature enough to make the decision on their own. In fact, the serious issue is that if they make a wrong decision such as committing criminal activities, its repercussions ruin the youth's life badly. Therefore, although living away from parents has positive, it is not worthy to endanger youths' life. Moreover, for those who want to continue their studies to high levels, it can be an obstacle. In fact, trying to make money for life expresses can deter them to focus on their study and make them work more.
To conclude, in spite of that the young generation can achieve several skills by leaving home, I think its disadvantages outweigh its advantages. It is better they stay at home and leave home when they become fully mature.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, i think, in fact, no doubt, such as, in spite of, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14071856287 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88073277487 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604790419162 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6846892314 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3888888889 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276778581816 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822005895408 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106471802016 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180866538897 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120894402963 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.