Many people against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injures
these animals. Do you agree?
Dolphins are one of the most intelligent animal in the planet, and they are very easy to train. Hence, making them the best performers in circuses. However, many people are against training dolphins to perform for human . I agree with this statement because dolphins play a huge role in the ocean ecosystem, they are our friends, and they need freedoms.
First of all, dolphins play a huge role in their ecosystem, so if we keep them in circuses, we could affect the ocean ecosystem. Dolphins are one of the top predators, which means they hunt squids, fishes, etc for foods; therefore, without them, the ocean could overpopulate and cause some serious problems. Dolphins also prevent diseases from spreading in the sea because they eat fish that contain illnesses. We can also use dolphin to find out if there anything wrong with their environment such as, pollution in water, oil spill, etc.
Dolphins are certainly mothered nature’s good friends, but dolphins are also considered human’s friends. Dolphins are social animals, so they love to contact with humans, and they have saved human several times. According to DOLPHIN WORLD, in Akaba, several years ago, a British tourist, who is swimming in the sea, was rescued by three dolphins from sharks. This story is just one in many stories that tell us about dolphins’ heroic act. Dolphins are also helpful in medical therapy. People have disorder and metal problem may find treatment with dolphins very useful because it makes them happy, reduce stress, and help them to rehabilitate the societies.
Last but not least, Dolphins shouldn’t be caged in a circus because they deserve to live free and they need to live free. Dolphins are very active animals, so they need to be free in the big ocean where they belong, not in some small circus tank. Furthermore, living with human for too long makes dolphins lose their wild instinct. If we release them back in the ocean one day, they may never get used to the ocean habitat and die.
In conclusion, I believe that if you love something, set it free, and dolphins are our friends, so instead of forcing them to become circus clowns, let them swim free in their ocean and help us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90106951872 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49200820402 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550802139037 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1648267775 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4736842105 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228518507666 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816041680774 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696010321286 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137704250726 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723832148448 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.