Many people are afraid to leave their home because of crime. Some believe that more action
should be taken to prevent crime. While others feel that little action can be done to stop
crime. What is your view?
Irrefutably, the crime has drastically increased in digitised generationas a result crowd are afraid to leave their safe place. Sometime people are scary in all thing either if it is just simple thing. This essay shed light on both view of arguments. I
strongly advocate that the former view of this topic. Moreover, This essay discussion by relavant example of BBC news and world times news.
To begin with, nowadays technology has top in all segments, while it is more useful if you want to choose right path either it is risky for all of them. Furthermore, the technology increased discipline level is decreased and crime is born in each and every place. A government should take more strict action on crime and put a number of legislation in society. For example, bbc news state that the crime
rate rise 60% in few years because the poor planning of law applying. The government should think about special punishment for offense so people easily move in city without hesitation. On the second side, some people believe that the paltry penalizing is nothing for any damnation. If government should give a short retribution menkind think
it is very limited punishment. To exemplify, the world time news state that the in 19th century Government had decided hanging criminals in public place. Moreever crime
rate had decline in past era. A limited penalizing has not effective way the to the offender's crime.
From arguments and examples given i firmly believe that if any pupils do case authorities take a complete strong action against the felony for people better life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...it is more useful if you want to choose right path either it is risky for all of them...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun legislation seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much legislation', 'a good deal of legislation'.
Suggestion: much legislation; a good deal of legislation
...ake more strict action on crime and put a number of legislation in society. For example, bbc news state...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...enalizing is nothing for any damnation. If government should give a short retribut...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'offenders'' or 'offender's'?
Suggestion: offenders'; offender's
...lizing has not effective way the to the offenders crime. From arguments and examples gi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, while, as to, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98490566038 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61402412145 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.237720947 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5625 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225480621829 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680457717276 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544555873589 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899918583244 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491325765776 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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