Many people around the world are choosing to move to live in cities. What problems do people experience in big cities? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller towns?
Big cities have proven to be a good place to live as they have forever provided an immense pool of opportunities to people here. People who choose big cities are likely to earn more and also experiences good facilities with respect to housing and transport. This has however led to overcrowding of these places thereby causing multiple problems. In this essay, I shall discuss these problems and explore possible solutions.
The problem of moving to big cities is mainly caused by the goal to search employment. This has led to an increase in population and also difficulties in housing and sanitation thereby causing unhygienic living conditions. Overcrowding also hampers the smooth mobility of people from one destination to other. There is increased instances of homelessness and poverty as the prices of housing increases with the increase in demand.
It's about time that this issue of overcrowding in big cities is addressed by the government. As a solution to this, development of many other untapped areas needs to be taken into consideration thereby attracting people there. It is very important that along with the basic necessities, things like employment, hygiene, education, infrastructure among others are also taken care of.
In conclusion, such conscious and collective steps can reduce the imbalance in how the population of a country is located and at the same time reduce the problems faced in big cities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...creases with the increase in demand. Its about time that this issue of overcrowd...
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Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...t is very important that along with the basic necessities, things like employment, hygiene, educa...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'with respect to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25702811245 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.160642570281 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100401606426 0.0946595960268 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0522088353414 0.0501214627716 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0160642570281 0.0437548338989 37% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140562248996 0.122226691241 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0682730923695 0.0403226058552 169% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96085360399 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0481927710843 0.0326793684256 147% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0923694779116 0.0861772015684 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00803212851406 0.021408717616 38% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00803212851406 0.011925033212 67% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1430.0 1933.35771543 74% => OK
No of words: 230.0 316.048096192 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.21739130435 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20517956788 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.404347826087 0.374742101984 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.291304347826 0.28420135186 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2 0.203846283523 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152173913043 0.137316102897 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96085360399 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.037074148 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 60.5703382272 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1666666667 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1916121204 49.517814964 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.166666667 127.492653851 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 48.2971014493 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.0350877193 1.69124875643 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36845221321 0.332605444948 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0883208626171 0.102741220458 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0630908220349 0.0668466124924 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.561084736459 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153877560372 0.148594505496 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159643325948 0.134430193775 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859147140441 0.0742795772207 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.304119547302 0.324371583561 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0802680986527 0.0638462369009 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249510946669 0.228012699653 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767077268246 0.058150111329 132% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.