Many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle, others believe that governments should take care of it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While people used to live a healthier lifestyle, the recent decade has seen a dramatic increase in the rate of people’s infection to diverse ailments. Although it seems that each individual should bear the burden of provision of a healthy lifestyle for himself, I personally am of the opinion that the government’s responsibilities are more significant.
On one hand, it is an undeniable fact that each person in a society should be concerned about his own health. The underlying reason for this relies on the fact that nobody in a community would be in power of enforcing an individual to for example attend a gym or plan a healthy diet. Fostering such habits, although requiring constant care, would eliminate the possibility of a myriad of diverse ailments ranging from high blood pressure to heart diseases. Moreover, being involved in recreational activities such as playing physical games or attending group adventure programs, which are of great importance in ensuring of mental health for a human being, do not seem to be anybody else’s responsibility, but the individual himself.
On the other hand, however, it seems that some measures which are of necessity to be taken by government might not be at liberty of citizens. Firstly, a great deal of health problems that people are struggling with these days is attributable to the hectic lifestyle which is imposed on citizens by living in municipal cities. The tremendous amount of work place stress along with the traffic jam problems are only some mere examples of the wild range of crucial predicaments people are dealing with. It seems that the government should assume responsibility to provide the people in the community with a more sedentary lifestyle; which ensures the healthiness of citizens as well as their higher range of life expectancy.
By way of conclusion, there is no escape from the fact that each individual should be worried about his own health. However, it seems to me that the government’s actions for ensuring a healthy lifestyle of citizens are of greater importance.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16568047337 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07897632904 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550295857988 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4225759255 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.5 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208008052198 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786533739131 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518993868679 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135436304225 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312892802717 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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