Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
People have different views about how global sporting events will impact on their country. While there are some drawbacks when holding such important events, I would argue that it is better for a country to host an international sporting event.
This is likely to benefit those countries where sporting competitions are hosted. First and foremost, a country will be known more by almost people all over the world because this event will attract millions of people who are the fans of sport. Therefore, people in that country will proud of their nation even their country is small such as East Timor. From an economic perspective, celebrating an Olypimpic Game will result in greater demand for employment and tourism. Olympic Sydney 2000, is a typical example for this positive side, this event brought 1,6 millions of tourist to Australia in this year.
Howerver, the reputation and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle. Firstly, from the financial point of view, a country has to pay a huge amount of money for improving the infrastructures. This can lead to economic crisis in a country. For instance, Greece had to receive a gaint debt after Olympic Athen in 2004 and became the first country had to be supervised about finance by EC. Secondly, it can be influential the relationship between the countries if their athletes are unpleasant about the accomodation or meet the problem during the competition.
In conclusion, reserving the right to hold sporting events will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on a country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '6 million'.
Suggestion: 6 million
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1439688716 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75918564467 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603112840467 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6077266405 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.692307692 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265593337256 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931453772424 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752738004489 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176407281303 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947580442408 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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