More and more city workers are deciding to live in the country and travel into work every day. The result is increased traffic congestion and damage to the environment.
What measures do you think could be taken to encourage people not to travel such long distances into work?
Nowadays more and more people moving out from big overpopulated cities to less populated and clean air suburban areas to live. This is causing many problems such as traffic jams, environment degradation because most of the jobs (with big salaries) now are available only in the big metropolises, so people have to travel back into the cities every day to work. There are few ways to fix this problem.
Firstly, easiest way (by government) to improve this situation is rise prices of car fuel, its increased cost of traveling by car and enforce people to buy or rent apartment in the city and use public transportation system (if it available).The Second, most popular measure (government) is create car usage restrictions for citizen who live in country side, it means cars with numbers assign to other places such as, country side other smaller cities, are forbidden to enter in city. Results are same as, car fuel prices manipulation.
The other non popular measure because its cost a lot of money are open work places in suburb zone, and smaller city, it kills root of problems ones for all. Other, long term way to improve situation are change economic type, from industry type to post industry by changing physical work places to virtual. Its can be achieved by investment in new technology and education (startups, It sector and virtual reality ).
In conclusion, its many ways and methods to solve this problem but best of them are costly and because of it government choose the lees expensive one’s. They even earn money by adding new laws and restrictions.Best ways are long term ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00740740741 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67376722904 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.091603398 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.2 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184429187266 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603565212019 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615342299355 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984593391893 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766640868258 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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