More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Increased consumption of prestigious brand items have been sparking significant public controversy in recent decades, raising questions of their essentiality. Despite such contention, I think this consumer pattern could have both benefits and drawbacks.
There are many reasons for people’s tendency to purchase items from famous brands. First, since expenditure on luxury brands could be associated with high socio-economic standing, individuals consuming such commodities would be highly respected and revered by the society, leading to easier social integration and interaction. For example, in many educational institutions, schoolers with groovy apparel with famous labels are proved to make friends easier than counterparts with less recognizable ones, who are considered “unsophisticated and provincial” and could be susceptible to severe peer pressure and boycotting or even physical abuses from others. However, items from luxury brands are usually manufactured with internationally standardized production line and hand picked raw materials followed by sophisticated craftmanship, guaranteeing their sustainable functionality and artistry for users, fueling into booming consumption worldwide.
This consumer dynamic could be fraught with pitfalls but simultaneously bestow advantages. From the societal perspective, if individuals especially those with sub par purchasing powers and limited financial capacities could not have access to these prestigious labels, their personal representations and self-identity towards society could be oppressed and badly wounded as they feel inhibited and socially marginalized for not conforming to the self-imposed social norms. This means that mental impairments resulting in inadequate self-confidence could be inevitable products, increasing the vulnerability to some critical psychological conditions such as social anxiety or even depression. In contrast, from the economic perspective, by having ramped up offshoring investments in developing nations in recent years, some prestigious brand corporations have created a great number of occupational opportunities for locals, outfitting them with vocational training for different job specifications, ensuring stable financial resources for those who used to be exposed to severe poverty in the past.
In conclusion, there are reasons related to social status and products’ quality feeding into the rise in this consumption trend. Additionally, this trend could both lead to some negative mental impacts on users but have significant economic benefits at the same time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2237.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.3014084507 5.12529762239 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38789752398 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645070422535 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.184406381 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.416666667 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5833333333 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109748659838 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476095376839 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386114016362 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666357354106 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03589385164 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 16.66 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.85 12.4159519038 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.75 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 78.4519038076 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.