most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial.to what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development?

Essay topics:

most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial.
to what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development?

A global village is widely advocated of by a majority of people. While some people believe this trend brings benefits, others hold an opposite view. The positives as well as the negatives of this development will be discussed in this essay.

On the one hand, globalisation has its own merits. Firstly, once every nation integrate and get closer to others, the barrier between them is about to disappear in terms of language, culture, tradition. Specifically, people from all over the world get chances to broaden their horizon of knowledge as well as become tolerant with others’ culture. Secondly, it is the connection between countries and countries established through a globalized world that the economy of participants is boosted considerably by the act of cooperation in a variety of fields namely transaction, investment, manufacturing and so on.

On the other hand, offences of a global village claim that one biggest drawback of this trend if the loss of identity. Precisely, were the world to undergo globalisation, citizens would be influenced or imitate others from different country, leading to the sync occurring in language and lifestyle on a gradual basis. Besides, owing to the fact that some features of a country appear in another ones and vice versa, not many people find it interesting to travel to the same place as their. Therefore, tourism industry which is a crucial field of the economy is likely to be threatened, causing harm to the overall budget.

In conclusion, people can take advantage of living in a united world, in the meantime, the disadvantages are also available. As far as the personal viewpoint is concerned, reservation of nations’ identities should be conducted in the era of integration.

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Average: 8.2 (3 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21631205674 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07077661687 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1935807948 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.153846154 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141645788215 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048227127001 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555419637313 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839333760202 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422448627877 0.056905535591 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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