Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?

Essay topics:

Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?

Motorways are becoming the popular ways to travel to destination in a shorter time and this can even travel for a long distance. However, this has been insufficient attention paid to result multifarious problems. The most obvious problems are the environmental aspects that cause various health hazards for the general public. Therefore, the local authorities can initiate congestion charge policies or other alternative methods to solve this issue.
Motorways are the easiest ways to travel to mainly metropolitan areas from rural areas and which can cover for the long distances at faster time. However the increase use of motorways has created several issues and how to reduce such usage has becoming a major concern for the government. Since problems have arisen with this method, alternative solutions have had to be researched.
The environment will be the primarily affected by this, because it results in global warming. All vehicles are dependent on fossil fuels which substances being released as a toxic chemical that are causing multifarious environmental hazard. However, perhaps the most apparent annoyance for general public is the nuisance that results from the traffic, noise, the dust and the unpleasant odours emanating from the motorways. Due to this, the world is suffering from the numerous viruses such as ZIKA, yellow sands and bird flu. Thus, the immediate solutions should be sought.
To solve this issue, the local authorities should impose congestion fees. In the UK, for example, after the announcement of congestion fee policies, the number of vehicles using of motorways have reduced by half in 2014 to 2015. By forcing the public to restrict the use of motorways, people will use more of public transportation and which can result in lesser number of vehicles on motorways as well as healthier environments.
Alternatively, the government could provide more alternative public transportation to cover long journeys for a shorter time to get rid of personal drivers from the motorways. This will encourage people to use of public transportation instead of their personal vehicles. Thus, this approach can reduce the problems caused by motorway usages.
In conclusion, despite the convenient and faster travelling to the destination, the motorways create various health and environmental issues. Therefore, it is important to find the effective solutions to tackle this issue. Impose of congestion fee policies and the improvement of public transportation can affect the number of vehicles using motorways.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...at cause various health hazards for the general public. Therefore, the local authorities can i...
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Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... for the long distances at faster time. However the increase use of motorways has creat...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...perhaps the most apparent annoyance for general public is the nuisance that results from the t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as well as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255172413793 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.147126436782 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114942528736 0.0946595960268 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0459770114943 0.0501214627716 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00689655172414 0.0437548338989 16% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.105747126437 0.122226691241 87% => OK
Participles: 0.048275862069 0.0403226058552 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96098380303 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0413793103448 0.0326793684256 127% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.11724137931 0.0861772015684 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0275862068966 0.021408717616 129% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016091954023 0.011925033212 135% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2540.0 1933.35771543 131% => OK
No of words: 394.0 316.048096192 125% => OK
Chars per words: 6.44670050761 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20517956788 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.439086294416 0.374742101984 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.329949238579 0.28420135186 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.243654822335 0.203846283523 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.167512690355 0.137316102897 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96098380303 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.037074148 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497461928934 0.56093040696 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.0860001288 60.7387585426 89% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7619047619 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1401343046 49.517814964 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.952380952 127.492653851 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7619047619 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.47619047619 0.814263465372 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 51.7568286198 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 2.04597701149 1.69124875643 121% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288932896975 0.332605444948 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0932011325639 0.102741220458 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0872197284468 0.0668466124924 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.548958568658 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150915851982 0.148594505496 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112008101682 0.134430193775 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624798264843 0.0742795772207 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.393211269223 0.324371583561 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0464337633973 0.0638462369009 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198249000947 0.228012699653 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034753850069 0.058150111329 60% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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