Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problem of motorways and what solutions are there?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
the volume of vehicle has developed drastically for over one decade. Every household has their own cars, two or more. This growth affects a congestion at every crossroad. In order to prevent this, government constructs a motorway. Unfortunately, this construction causes unpredictable situation whether it comes from human action or environment.
Most every freeway access was built on productive soil. As a result, a land degradation occurs due to the prevalence of falling trees and less spot trees to grow. The top layer of earth remains strong if it is held by trees, and if earth has lost their trees the land will vulnerably to erode. Consequently, our island shape will get smaller at every centuries.
The one-way road system in motorway impacts most drivers more relaxing and pleasant. However, this situation creates the lost of concentration and majority of drivers will fall a sleep unconsciousness, then the traffic accidents will occur.
This type of street also becomes a suitable place to the juveniles to arrange an underground race tracks. The wide long smooth track is appealed by number of youth racers, and it happens mostly at the night when the roads are seemingly quiet.
There are many ways to tackle this three phenomena. First, the constructors have to study the geological side of the land at the first hand. Once they found the result, they have to prioritize firstly on death soil rather than potential soil. Most preferred layers is near the seashore. Secondly, to avoid traffic crush, the government should decide the minimal pace to accelerate and serve the raiders with the rest area, so the tired passengers can break and rest. Lastly, government should strengthen the policy on illegal actions which happened on motorways. The police should watch every vigilant performances by patrol of flying a drone on every vital place in the streets.
Above all, the government should not just providing the best traffic circulation but the must concern firstly on how it affect on what surrounding it, and have to take care of it at the prior or post construction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08115942029 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76796266364 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63768115942 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5018280345 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4761904762 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80952380952 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0614438575152 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0172418126622 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0223278181333 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0318253646429 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233249330311 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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