Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
The quantity of transnational companies is progressively flourishing in developing nations. This essay will suggest that creating job opportunities is the biggest advantage of this and the risk of outweighing domestic businesses is the primary disadvantage.
Due to the need of enhancing their own workforce, multinational companies usually focus on employing hard-working and gifted workers from various countries. As a result, this brings about career opportunities for numerous people, helping them to cover the costs of living and maintain work/life balance. It is remarkable that when employees are satisfied with the benefits earned from foreign businesses, they are in a bid to spend more efforts on working, leading to higher and better capacity. According to a recent survey of Vietnamese government, over 85 percent of Samsung staff claimed that thanks to the increase in number of company’s branches, it is much easier for them to climb the career ladder or get promotion, thus improve their income remarkably.
Despite the aforementioned advantages, the expansion of transnational companies means the appearance and rise of powerful competitors of local businesses. In fact, consumers have a tendency to choose products made by overseas units due to their higher quality in comparison with domestic ones. Should local companies not struggle to grapple for existence, the potential of bankruptcy will be predictable, leading to the unbalance of sides in the economical battle. For example, in 2010, 95 percent of Thai buyers said that they preferred products from other countries, such as the USA or Spain because they have more beautiful shapes as well as better quality.
In conclusion, the flourish of transnational businesses and organizations can be advantageous if it provides job opportunities to local individuals, however, the potential drawback is that it may be challenging for native companies to compete with these worldwide ones.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5618729097 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20554560803 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605351170569 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7261322778 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.181818182 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137757813175 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517870780291 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430479143561 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905048808923 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556147045204 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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