The natural resources such as oil and freshwater are being consumed at alarming rate What problems it can cause How can we solve this problem

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The natural resources such as oil and freshwater are being consumed at alarming rate. What problems it can cause? How can we solve this problem?

Technical advancements cause more use of natural resources even these are limited in quantity. There is not doubt that utilization of natural resources such as oil and freshwater is soaring day by day on global level. It result in plenty of problems and number of measures cab be taken to tackle this issue.

On the one hand, there are number of obstacles which brings by overuse of natural resources. Firstly, misuse of limited natural resources happen due to technology as innovations are taking place on daily basis, every person own personal vehicle, which runs by burning fuel. Moreover, oil is limited resource and it is impossible to produce in short span of time as it took millions of years to produce again. Therefore, if the use is increasing then it will deprive the upcoming generations from these resources as well as motor vehicles are of no use without fuel. Secondly, life on earth is highly depend on water and underground water is pumped for many purposes such as irrigation and electricity generation. Finally, overuse of oil leads to more carbondyoxide emissions which contaminate air and become cause of global warming. Also, Deforestation ruins habitats of wild animals and cause soil erosion and floods.

On the other hand, ample of solutions can be applied to eradicate this serious problem. First of all, increasing number of vehicles cause the overuse of oil reserves therefore, public should use alternative modes of transport in order to save oil and environment. For an instance, using bicycle contributes many benefits as it is eco-friendly mode of transport which escapes environment from pollution. Besides this, recycling water by machines would provide large amount of water for irrigation and to other major plants. Additionally, government should implement strict rules and regulations in factories of pollution bills so they they will emit less effluents as industries are primary cause of pollution.

To conclude, although natural resources are using at large level and they are declining yet there are some solutions which works efficiently for saving limited natural resources such as oil, trees, water etcetera.

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Average: 8.5 (27 votes)

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also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, in short, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26956521739 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81712290724 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2099470747 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.625 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 49.0 5.01903807615 976% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239363780238 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074232457519 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634712499608 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15821934216 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567723725859 0.056905535591 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.