Now big cities have many problems. What are these problems? Do you think the government should encourage city residents to move to small cities and towns?
Recent decades have witnessed an increase in problems in metropolitan areas, raising many questions of citizens’ safety. Given that these problems could be pronounced, city residents should be encouraged to live in smaller cities or towns.
It is noticeable that there are many problems related to living in big cities. First, Metropolitan areas are invariably associated with the existence of many industrial parks and transportation. This will act as an incentive for the higher degree of carbon dioxide and methane concentrations in the environment, making city citizens more sensitive to respiratory diseases especially lung cancers and tuberculosis. Second, Due to the inadequacy of the fresh food supply, many megacities has observed a rise the number of vegetables and fruits contaminated with carcinogenic coloring and preservatives, thereby resulting a growth in the cases of foodborne diseases in residents.
However, It is not highly recommended that city dwellers should move to other rural areas or smaller cities. First, small cities mean lower number of big companies and multinational corporations than bigger ones. This will lead to limited job opportunities in citizens especially younger ones, accelerating general unemployment rates. Second, rural areas correlate with the failure in transportation infrastructures such as the lack of super highways and bridges. This will require many physical travels, costing unnecessary time, money and effort for citizens in case of going to another destination.
In conclusion, Although the potential problems associated with metropolitan areas could be ostensible, city dwellers should not live in smaller cities or towns due to some limitations of transportation and competitive employment market.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.861003861 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29006920721 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606177606178 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.178473042 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285143221468 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100745400357 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954993337601 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187514863836 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745094083938 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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