Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is normally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their humanity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about the fact that new drugs and other products are largely tested by animal experiments. While I tend towards the viewpoint that animal testing is normally wrong, I believe people should do some testing on animals because of its essential for pharmaceutical industry.
On the one hand, some people find that animal experiments give bad effects to animal's living, which is in conflict with the moral ethics. By forcing animals using new drugs, which leads to their health threat, a vast number of them can not survive the test. Moreover, people have no right to treat animals as human experiments since every single animal has its own life. Another disadvantage of testing on animals is the danger when tested animal’s bodies have the new virus, which means that people have to face with more health problems.
However, I would argue that animal experiments should be widely used in many aspects. Firstly, modern techniques using for testing the safety of new medicine or other products cost a vast amount of money and time, which would be better to be spent on human's life-improving researches. Furthermore, some animals have strong breeding, which means that there is no impact on their existence even though people use them on experiments. Therefore, a certain amount of suffering on the part of mice or rats can be justified if human lives are saved. Finally, a huge amount of effects on organic living organisms when doing testing on animals cause more accurate results in terms of applying to human bodies. As a result of using these animal tested medicines for a long time, there would be an increasing percentage of healthy people in all over the world.
In conclusion, it seems to me that animal experiments should be maintained to create new medicines and test the safety of other products to improve people’s life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03215434084 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63292811523 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540192926045 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0512079442 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.384615385 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470672203026 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182086917327 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846834217113 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316453015625 0.151304729494 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353992808276 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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