Nowadays business face problems with new employees who just finished their education and lack of some interpersonal skills such and work in a team what do u think what are the cause of this how can it be resolved

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Nowadays business face problems with new employees who just finished their education and lack of some interpersonal skills such and work in a team. what do u think what are the cause of this? how can it be resolved?

Nowadays, the companies are struggling up to the extreme limit due to the lake of basic skills such as teamwork, leadership in the freshly graduate students. To my mind, out of many reasons, the inadequate level of internship work and theory-based educational skeletons are majorly affected reason for this lake of skills in the graduates. Nevertheless, precise administration and some strict rules may ameliorate this situation.

To begin with, the students are less likely to encourage for doing an internship during the academic phase of life - which, undoubtedly, give an exposure for learning practical skills. Not just this, most of the education institutes put a more focus on the theoretical knowledge rather than its practical implementation and approaches. Due to this aforementioned compelling reasons, students lake from the professional sense of work, at the end of the college life.

Secondly, our parental upbringing and cultural approaches also play an indispensable role in pouring professional sense in children. Consider, for example, in the USA parents force their children to work part-time during the leisure time or in vacations - which is accountable for indulging a professional sense in children, since childhood. Seen in this light, someone's way of living and the parental liberal approach, sometimes, are responsible for these severe consequences.

On the practical note, the government and education institutes can work jointly and introduce a compulsory "Internship" in the pre-final year of the graduation - which moulds the students in the professional shape, without being said. Additionally, the tutors must emphasize students to attend the seminar and lectures of well-known entrepreneurs. This proves as a blessing in disguise for the graduates. By this precise administration, we can indulge a sense of professionalism in the students before starting their invaluable professional voyage.

In a nutshell, the cited evidence supports my view that albeit the practical concern exists in our society - which are probable causes of the lake of interpersonal skills in the graduates, the implementation of aforementioned policy, undoubtedly, minimised its risks. In the future, above stated vital solution approach will grow more pronounced due to its positive promotions.

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Average: 9.1 (5 votes)

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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'such as', 'to begin with']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261306532663 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.0954773869347 0.155533422707 61% => OK
Adjectives: 0.123115577889 0.0946595960268 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.035175879397 0.0501214627716 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0251256281407 0.0437548338989 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138190954774 0.122226691241 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0226130653266 0.0403226058552 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.41835262866 2.80594681477 122% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0226130653266 0.0326793684256 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00251256281407 0.00163938923432 153% => OK
Determiners: 0.125628140704 0.0861772015684 146% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0125628140704 0.021408717616 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0100502512563 0.011925033212 84% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2323.0 1933.35771543 120% => OK
No of words: 350.0 316.048096192 111% => OK
Chars per words: 6.63714285714 6.12580529183 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.425714285714 0.374742101984 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.357142857143 0.28420135186 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.3 0.203846283523 147% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.22 0.137316102897 160% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41835262866 2.80594681477 122% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.037074148 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 67.0364249397 60.7387585426 110% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.3333333333 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4963199573 49.517814964 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.866666667 127.492653851 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.814263465372 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 59.0476190476 49.1944974215 120% => OK
Elegance: 2.70967741935 1.69124875643 160% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304575273424 0.332605444948 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0917604693375 0.102741220458 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0521566104002 0.0668466124924 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.61445464441 0.534860350844 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152389413169 0.148594505496 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136862210178 0.134430193775 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528602698753 0.0742795772207 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.378541049055 0.324371583561 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.092796652713 0.0638462369009 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211497384964 0.228012699653 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407734744628 0.058150111329 70% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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