Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same jobs. What problems this causes? What are solutions?
The job market is becoming more and more competitive environment as the elderly seeking for jobs are filling applicants from young generations for the same positions. This phenomenon creates some detrimental impacts on national stabilization in terms of economy and citizens’ well-being. The essay will provide some mandatory remedies to the problem.
There are a variety of negative consequences when it comes to the competition between young and old job applicants. Firstly, young people having to compete with old people, who have spent many years accumulating experience, are imposed the possibility of losing their opportunity for their dream job. This will consequently heightens the unemployment rate, causing social unrest and crime escalation. Secondly, if old job seekers cannot compete with their descendants in certain fields that requires versatility and creativity such as marketing or sales, they might fail to get the job. Without adequate financial means to foster their family and themselves, elderly people might have to live in poverty.
The government should implement some immediate actions to confront with this phenomenon. New policies should be established in order to provide appropriate social welfare, including old-aged pensions and medical healthcare, so that they can live comfortably when they retire. Another effective solution is to modify retirement age over citizens who is unemployed. This will reduce the competition for the same jobs between the young and the old and empower and increase chance for young people to get their wanted position.
In conclusion, the mentioned competition could produce undesirably issues to both patterns of working aged population, the government certainly play a tremendous role in tackling the situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'heighten'
Suggestion: heighten
...their dream job. This will consequently heightens the unemployment rate, causing social u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71535580524 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99666663835 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2841170974 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.384615385 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183645661463 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599611257031 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504266715999 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974721004335 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571864357749 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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