Nowadays, music and newspaper are available online. what are the advantages and disadvantages. explain with examples.
Nowadays, as consequences of the technology and Internet, e-paper, and online music are gaining more prevalence throughout the world. Nevertheless, some traditionalists claim that this emerging trend has the divastating impact rather than positive promotions - contrary to common belief. To my mind, features of these such as easier access and computability outweigh the disadvantages. However, the government and the Internet providers can put forward a combined step in order to address negative consequences effectively.
To begin with, the introduction of online music stores in e-paper seems to be perfect options for the hectic and faster life. Additionally, users can access newspapers and pop in the earbuds at their own pace of time - which is also much convenient and preferred way for city dwellers. Not just this, unlimited editions and versions of newspaper can be accessed by users and also have an exposure to the international variety of music such as Hip Hop, rap, and so on, using the Internet. However, these prove as a quite expensive as an individually person need to pay one time Internet rentals. Seen in this light, these Internet services appears to be incontrovertible, especially in the 21st century.
On the other hand, due to these services, the local businesses of music CD DVD manufacturer and newspapers press have the pernicious impact. Consider, for example, as per research has borne out by the Indian market analysis 50% of the news presses are transformed to run down state as a result of the e-paper services. Moreover, sometimes, the neutrality of news cannot identify on the Internet, which is often found as a product of piracy. So, the frequent Internet user may also face such problems, like local businessmen.
On a practical note, the government and Internet provider can work as a "joint-venture" and address these concerns effectively. The government can analyse the downloading content and website access history of users with greater aid by Internet operators. Furthermore, to mitigate the aspects of piracy the government can also block suspicious websites. Eventually, by this I mean to say, up to an extent, most of the country can diminish aspects of this trend - as America do.
In a nutshell, the cited evidence supports my view that most of the aforementioned positive promotions outweigh possible backlashes. In the future, as in today's world, we cannot stay isolated from online free music and e-paper, the above-stated approach, definitely, minimize the risks of negative impacts.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'i mean', 'such as', 'as a result', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272921108742 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.0959488272921 0.155533422707 62% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100213219616 0.0946595960268 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0575692963753 0.0501214627716 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0106609808102 0.0437548338989 24% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.121535181237 0.122226691241 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0191897654584 0.0403226058552 48% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.21947470103 2.80594681477 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0277185501066 0.0326793684256 85% => OK
Particles: 0.00639658848614 0.00163938923432 390% => OK
Determiners: 0.113006396588 0.0861772015684 131% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0234541577825 0.021408717616 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00426439232409 0.011925033212 36% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2559.0 1933.35771543 132% => OK
No of words: 406.0 316.048096192 128% => OK
Chars per words: 6.30295566502 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20517956788 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.384236453202 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.325123152709 0.28420135186 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.258620689655 0.203846283523 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155172413793 0.137316102897 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21947470103 2.80594681477 115% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.037074148 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57881773399 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 68.9405782955 60.7387585426 114% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3684210526 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2842597147 49.517814964 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.684210526 127.492653851 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 20.7743622355 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.789473684211 0.814263465372 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 53.8807363236 49.1944974215 110% => OK
Elegance: 2.51948051948 1.69124875643 149% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258810973483 0.332605444948 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0940063061219 0.102741220458 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0447729185957 0.0668466124924 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.567888911938 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.113847593247 0.148594505496 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108910655719 0.134430193775 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832743590708 0.0742795772207 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.386296412501 0.324371583561 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0757906578058 0.0638462369009 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180089767544 0.228012699653 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518205869032 0.058150111329 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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