Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?
There has been a major concern that the number of young people who apply to science classes in universities is decreasing in many countries around the world. Some explanations for this problems will be put forward, before an analysis of its impact on society.
There are several reasons why young people do not want to choose science as their major in their universities. First, the syllabus of science class makes the incredible pressure for young people. For example, youngsters who follow the science curriculums in Viet Nam are required to complete a lot of essays, tasks, research,… and they have to devote almost their time in labs for essential experiments. Furthermore, science experiments cost students a great deal of money. For instance, when young people need to implement some science chemistry experiments, they have to spend their money preparing laboratory instruments such as chemical substances, test tubes.
Not enough students for science curriculums causes some effects on society. Firstly, the number of students are trained that is not enough for the demands of research tasks.This may lead to the stagnation of science research. Secondly, the number of youngsters are not enough for science class that is the main major interrupt the science courses. For example, if the number of students is needed to start one science class is 15 people, this course not to be opened until at least 15 young people apply for this class.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for the decrease in the number of science students and this causes some negative effects on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13688212928 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69982326658 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520912547529 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2376787617 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.583333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276882401845 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121462579861 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557628593225 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186430977974 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472026683507 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.