Nowadays the trend of making movies on real heroes such as sportsmen and patriots is increasing. Do its advantages outweigh disadvantages.
In these days we can see filly transfiguration in concept of movies. It is a fact that most of the movies are made on basis of reality like on spotstars and patriots instead of imagination and fantasy. According to me it has more merits as compared to demerits.
Admittedly, making movies on authentic heroes such as sportsmen and patriots bring numerous advantages. Firstly, knowing about history is extremely important for everyone as it helps us in forecasting about future on basis of past happenings. However, some people are unaware about historical background of their country like works done by their patriots for the nation. Therefore, movies about real patriots may give information about them as well as leads to the feeling of patriotism. Secondly, it may widen the horizons of knowledge of people about their national history . Moreover, it is good way to take motivation and courage as real stories about patriots let people to think about their nation and contribute for protecting country from external forces to live freely. For example, maryar bhagat singh has a great contribution in freedom of country from British rulers and he took revenge of masacar of jaleyawala bagh when innocent people were fired by rulers. Most importantly , the movies based on Bharat singh impressed many people and make them aware about their life and their sacrifice for the nation.
In addition to this, movies on sportsmen give them recognition on global level which is not only provide respect but also boost confidence of players. By watching movies of victorious and popular figures young ones may avoid bad company and make sure their contribution for the country. To elaborate it, in order to develop a country it's famous personalities play an vital role as they represent country. Thus, natives of country feel proud of them. For an instance, movie on milkha singh which was a brilliant athlete, has been made since 2013 in which they showed his talent of running as flying and his experience of life as well. It encouraged youngsters to take participate in sports for getting name and fame. Whereas ,movies on imagination and creativity also show talent of people.
To conclude, although people like stories of imagination and fantasy yet I believe that real stories describe the true stories and bring many benefits than abstraction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1038961039 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7066588339 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574025974026 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.965853465 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.421052632 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2631578947 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42105263158 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150002682287 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498949862387 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693834687175 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740293730399 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359889773414 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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