Nowadays young people have to make the decision about their future career. Some people, however, believe that teachers and parents can make a better choice for their future career. Discuss both options and include your opinion with relevant examples from your own experience.
Pursuing the children to choose the appropriate career or giving them the opportunity to opt by themself has been a disputable issue in all families. Many believe that children should be freedom to pick up their future occupation while others counter parent have to seek a proper job which fit their children. Both views will be analyzed before preference will be revealed.
From one hand, juveniles desire to follow their dreams without dictating any attitudes in order to fuel their appetite to enhance their innovation as well as creativity. American children are the salient example, they occupy on which they keen without exterior pressure. As American has a global reputation of innovative and creative people, it is obvious that children should follow their interest.
On the other hand, affluent argue that parent and teachers are the people who more involve with children and they know their individual talent. Also, parents are veteran in their career and acquainted with the economical situation. Take doctors as an example, as they have experience in their major, they believe their children should pursue their path in order to become prominent doctors as their ancestor was. Meanwhile, monetary incentive and the prestigious job which passed throw the family, tempt children to obey their parents. Consequently, it is clear why parents believe, it is their duty to choose their children the proper job.
By analyzing both perspectives, it is assumed that a balance of personal interest and parent`s recommendation should be considered. It can be ridiculous to deter children to opt their plausible career, also, parent`s suggestion would be positive ramification.
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...t is their duty to choose their children the proper job. By analyzing both persp...
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...tion would be positive ramification.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40377358491 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81568611313 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581132075472 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0345597402 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233940609649 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926491173483 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560461705598 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142382599194 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451958095469 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.