The number of elderly people in the world is increasing What do you think are the positive and negative effects of this trend

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The number of elderly people in the world is increasing. What do you think are the positive and negative effects of this trend?

Nowadays the number of old people is rising in all over the globe and there is an argument about whether or not it is beneficial. Following descriptions are going to clarify my perspective about advantages and drawbacks of this situation.

Turning attention to the pros, in my point of view nobody can argue against the fact that elderly people are more experienced and some of them have a good sense of leadership. So, the presence of people in advanced age could be useful. Take for example a company which works on sales and marketing. It is a key point for making a great profit that all s...

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