One of the major problems that faces today s government is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing population whilst still trying to protect the environment

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One of the major problems that faces today's government is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing population whilst still trying to protect the environment.

In this contemporary era, population of mankind has been augmenting by leaps and bones. With increase in number of people, a few critical circumstances have been created such as provision of accommodation while keeping environment criteria in mind that it would not blemish. This essay will outline a few difficulties of above notion as well as their counter measure.

To commece with, the way human population accelerates is, ostensibly, a burning issue. Nevertheless, in order to compensate with it to proffer each and everyone their fundamental need in duly manner, has become a dominant problem, take example of living facilities. Deforestation has been came into the picture by human activities for the construction of houses. Moreover, the waste generated by recidential area also add up in environment hazards. For instance, amount of carbon emitted, while the production of concrete is enormous though it always has been out of concern. Henceforth, detrimental activities of human cause harm to nature.

Furthermore, to resolve such problems scrupulous can be taken. Firstly, more verticle development of cities should be patronized, instead of horizontal development, which will succor to consume less land. Secondly, concept of green building and sustainable building will avail to hinder generation of pollutant. To illustrate, sustainable building uses its own resources such as solar power, recycle and water treatment plant as well as waste disposal system. Consequently, it will plunge the environmental issues.

To recapitulate, to cope up with the requirment of people nature suffers serious danger. Paradoxically, with bolster of proper menthods in construction by authorities as well as public, fruitful results can be accomplished.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...roduction of concrete is enormous though it always has been out of concern. Hence...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64528301887 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23751593571 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6361229939 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805886607657 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0239021467378 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0220478762408 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.041036687828 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293217578449 0.056905535591 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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