In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small co

Until recently, many tended to live in villages and they generally resent their life. However, at present time, a wide range of people are interested in living in a large city rather than small society.

There were 3 main benefits to living in countryside. Firstly, people usually knew and spoke to each other whether or not they got familiar before. As a consequence, inhabitants hold the opinion that they never felt lonely. For example, children played together freely without any restriction by their families, while they grew up being polite too. Secondly, living in small communities did not cause highly controversial unlike developed cities. Lastly, spectacular scenery and rocky mountains surrounded by countryside which made residents acquiescent.

On the other hand, small society has drawbacks, in other words, we are fully aware that people those who want to make progress in their life conducted new opportunities for themselves. For instance, the majority of people may not be able to launch diverse products without high development tools. Hence, they decided to go somewhere having more facilities, including large factory, university and hospital which barely located near villages. Furthermore, a very point to consider is that no one can deny transportation systems have not a great role in living on the outskirts. Consequently, it was highly unlikely to live there easily.

Ultimately, a small village as a good place to live makes people more enjoyable to do their daily activity with others rather than in a big city. However, spending whole lifetime in this place would raise many disadvantages. Where possible, local governments should pay particular attention to notice supra-and-infrastructure improvement for small villages.

Votes
Average: 8.1 (4 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...le usually knew and spoke to each other whether or not they got familiar before. As a conseque...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47985347985 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08910895858 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70695970696 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1526330427 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301146411345 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875119461038 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641259485523 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188617503019 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452349725609 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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